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Post by firedragoon18 on Oct 14, 2012 0:26:15 GMT -5
Name:Tetsuo Hawejima Age:16 Visual Age:16 Appearance:Occupation:Goes to Shinjizama High School Neuro-Linker:Red Keywords:"CEOstra" History:On the day Tetsuo was going to be born his father was on his way home from work.While on his way home from work a stranger jumped the curve hitting Tetsuo's father killing him on impact. Later on in the evening Tetsuo's mother starts the process of bringing him into the world. While bringing Tetsuo into the world she lost her life leaving the young infant as an orphan. Time passed and Tetsuo was later on adopted.
When Tetsuo gotten to his new home he was then introduced to Carly Ceostra his new adopted sister.At first Tetsuo and Carly hated eachother and got into arguments. when Tetsuo started school he constantlly got bullied so when Tetsuo got home from school he used the neuro-linker to escape the real world. A few days later his sister Carly told him about the brain burst program. It took a few minutes for him to download the Brain-Burst program
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Post by Kaishi on Oct 14, 2012 0:35:45 GMT -5
Keywords, wrong. Length of History, worng. It needs to be at least two paragraphs.
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Post by Ceostra on Oct 14, 2012 1:38:30 GMT -5
you need to find the rest of the keywords and name the school you go to
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Post by Ceostra on Oct 14, 2012 1:44:41 GMT -5
Alright, approved.
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